Author's Note: If anyone sees this post, congratulations for finding out my raw writing! Anyway, I have lack of free time than I used to with slow progresses and improvement in my writing skills so... I'm open for feedbacks and criticisms for the first part of UnderDespair's prologue (remake version) and Day 2 (of Chapter 1) ! However, keep in mind that I use Australian English (with the exceptation of quotation marks) , and anonymous comments are fine if you don't wish to be mentioned in the special thanks. There will be some words highlighted from my last updated history where I struggled the most in. Feedbacks and criticisms will be closed once this post is removed without notice. Other than that, please enjoy the preview and improved changes between the previous (published) prologue and this current (remake) version ! Thanks for reading!